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The Haunted Mountain by Amber age 9

2/10/2014

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I am the terrifying, monstrous and haunted mountain.

The one who sneakily steals all broken-hearted souls.

I am as horrible as a furious lion.

Terrified, scared, horrified – who will vanish first?

Who will be trapped?

I will steal your repulsive dreadful spine.

Whoever tries to trespass my horrible, haunted mountain?

I will haunt you for eternity! 

I will scare and terrify the living at dawn.
2 Comments
Rachel Ashcroft
2/10/2014 05:24:52 am

Wow! I love the use of similes and rhetorical questioning! A brilliant piece of work!

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Lapland
3/26/2014 04:35:03 am

cool

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