I am the terrifying, monstrous and haunted mountain. The one who sneakily steals all broken-hearted souls. I am as horrible as a furious lion. Terrified, scared, horrified – who will vanish first? Who will be trapped? I will steal your repulsive dreadful spine. Whoever tries to trespass my horrible, haunted mountain? I will haunt you for eternity! I will scare and terrify the living at dawn.
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Rachel Ashcroft
2/10/2014 05:24:52 am
Wow! I love the use of similes and rhetorical questioning! A brilliant piece of work!
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Lapland
3/26/2014 04:35:03 am
cool
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