I am the chill upon your spine, The one who will take down the pitch- black clouds. I am your dream crusher. I will crush them from underneath your feet. I will summon armies of wind, rain and snow. Monstrous, murky, hideous – who will live? Scared, shocked people sky for their lives! I am as colossal as The Great Wall Of China. When people climb me will they survive or will they die? I am your greatest fear!
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Miss O'B
2/10/2014 06:16:17 am
Well done Phoebe! I love the use a rhetorical question and alliteration :) It gave me a chill down my spine!
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Freya
2/10/2014 05:00:39 pm
I really like the use of the first person here, it really brings the mountain to life.
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