I am the chill upon your spine,
The one who will take down the pitch- black clouds.
I am your dream crusher.
I will crush them from underneath your feet.
I will summon armies of wind, rain and snow.
Monstrous, murky, hideous – who will live?
Scared, shocked people sky for their lives!
I am as colossal as The Great Wall Of China.
When people climb me will they survive or will they die?
I am your greatest fear!
2/10/2014 06:16:17 am
Well done Phoebe! I love the use a rhetorical question and alliteration :) It gave me a chill down my spine!
2/10/2014 05:00:39 pm
I really like the use of the first person here, it really brings the mountain to life.
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