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Oliver

3/17/2014

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3/17/2014 08:03:29 am

Your word choice and language is improving all the time Oliver. Now it's time to really focus on your sentence structure and punctuation to move your writing on further. Well done!

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Joanne Irwin
3/23/2014 11:09:51 pm

Amazing writing and so sensitive. You have totally got the mood and therefore the understanding of this piece of film. Take on board Mr Felton's comments and your writing can only get stronger. Well done Oliver.

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