I like the opening line to your 3rd paragraph best.. 'Another key was pressed, another memory came back to him.'
I find it amazing that a 9 year old can write such a well written story, the imagination and the phrasing I find incredible!
Mr Felton's class at St Paschal Baylon Catholic Primary School in Childwall Liverpool, created these pieces of work about 'The Piano.' Please leave comments for the authors.Make your comments positive.All comments will be moderated by the shed before they are posted. Do not put any personal details on the blog.