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Kate

3/17/2014

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Mr Literacy Shed
3/17/2014 07:47:43 am

I like the opening line to your 3rd paragraph best.. 'Another key was pressed, another memory came back to him.'

Well done!

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Marie Dunn
3/22/2014 04:33:43 am

I find it amazing that a 9 year old can write such a well written story, the imagination and the phrasing I find incredible!

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    Mr Felton's class at St Paschal Baylon Catholic Primary School in Childwall Liverpool, created these pieces of work about 'The Piano.' 

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