Mr Literacy Shed
3/17/2014 07:47:43 am
I like the opening line to your 3rd paragraph best.. 'Another key was pressed, another memory came back to him.'
3/22/2014 04:33:43 am
I find it amazing that a 9 year old can write such a well written story, the imagination and the phrasing I find incredible!
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