My favourite line is 'A soft tune flowed out of the piano' I can imagine this in my head. I also like how you contrast the sad times with the happy childhood.
A great effort!
Couldn't agree more with Mr Literacy Shed, Ben. What a way to open a paragraph. Well done! Keep up the progress you re making in your writing.
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