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Ben W

3/17/2014

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Mr Literacy Shed
3/17/2014 08:03:26 am

My favourite line is 'A soft tune flowed out of the piano' I can imagine this in my head. I also like how you contrast the sad times with the happy childhood.

A great effort!

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Mr Felton link
3/17/2014 08:07:12 am

Couldn't agree more with Mr Literacy Shed, Ben. What a way to open a paragraph. Well done! Keep up the progress you re making in your writing.

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